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07/24/15
This was an interesting depiction of the crucifixion. I did notice several spelling and punctuation errors. Watch that because, for those of us who notice these things, it is a detraction from the story.
07/25/15
Good message and good job with this piece. I enjoyed it.

Thank you.
God bless~
This story depicts the cruxification of Christ in an unusual way I especially was touched by the ending few senses. I will remember not washing the clothes as a reminder of His sacrifice.