The Official Writing Challenge
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This story was engaging right from the beginning. A spurned love of many years ago. Kept locked away.Will new love find her some day. It appears so. Well written.
It was a touching story. I found some sentences to be too long. Sentence fragments also appeared, and maybe some punctuation errors. However, all in all, it was a good piece.
A lovely story and theme throughout this piece. It was like a mini book. I loved it.

God bless~