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05/02/14
What a beautiful poetic sounding story. I loved how you wrapped up your well written, and on topic entry. So peaceful, and you chose one of my favorite verses (although there are numerous ones in Isaiah for me!) to sum up this delightful piece.

Well done.

God bless~
05/04/14
This is a beautiful Spirit-filled message that I think would fit perfect in any devotional publication. I hope you submit this for publication somewhere, for free if need be - it's a delightful and needful message to get "out there".
05/04/14
This devotional is well thought out and had a natural flow to it with a satisfying ending. Well done.
I liked it all the way - the color, the emotion, the effort displayed. It was heartfelt.

Thoughtful and meaningful. Shows a personal commitment.

Now, write it in such a way that it would encourage us to spend some such time as our devotion.
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