The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/11
I don't know if this is a true story or not, but it sure sounds like one. Great descriptions of what it feels to be trapped under water and finally surface.

Wonderfully written.
Wow this was so full of suspense! I felt my heart thudding the fact that it was written in first person so I knew the MC would live, but my heart was still thumping.Great job of writing.
03/24/11
well done!