The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute story. I enjoyed the interaction between the boy and the dog. I'm not entirely sure how this fits with the topic, though. Also, in this sentence, "He sat real quiet so that the dog would not hear him but forget that Sammers could find him by smelling him", I think you meant forgot, not forget. Really cute story, though. I enjoyed reading it. :-)
04/25/10
I also thought it was a cute story and enjoyed it. I love how God does answer us, in ways just like you described in the story. I noticed that the mother and child both seemed to be very calm about the situation. If it were a girl, I bet there would have been some crying and carrying on!!
This is a delightful story. It reminds me of the stories that used to be on the Sunday School handouts for the kids to take home each week. This would be perfect for one of those or for a youth magazine.