The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/05
Oh my, didn't sound boring to me. Very interesting and discriptive. Needs a little work on sentence structure, and paragraphing but still a nice article. Keep writing! God bless, littlelight
I liked the imagery. I agree with working on the sentence structure but God's creation is never boring! Good job!
I agree with other comments, here. Also apprecate your keen sense of detail and appreciation for adventure!