The Official Writing Challenge
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Fascinating story!
Great action! Kept me on the edge of my seat till the end.
07/25/05
Oooh! I liked this one. Good story content and of course I like happy endings!
Very good! I loved your descriptions and how you constructed the story.
For a beginner, you're off to a great start. Excellent read. It had me gripped to the end. Well done and may God bless you always!
07/27/05
This was really good reading. I liked the ending, especially.
I really must add my applause to the rest. bravo, bravo, bravo, what a great story, and so inspirational.
Good development, careful attention to characters. Nicely done!
08/01/05
WOW! What a nice story,this is great.
08/03/05
A great read, Nina. I was on the edge of my seat. Well done. One little thing to look at and that is the use of throw away or obsolete words like 'just'. Check your first paragraph. I usually run the find function over an entry first 'just' to locate them 'cos those nasty critters love to slip by.