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Your grammatical usage and literary content are almost flawless. I bit of dialogue and action would spice this up and make it shine.
Great message and the flow of the story keeps things moving without losing the points.
This was wonderful! What a way to intertwine lots of classes into a small piece of work! You did a fantastic job! Keep on writing.
Thanks for this glimpse into a lively church! Clever title, too.
This was clever. I enjoyed your writing and take on a good healthy SS environment.
Terrific account. What a wonderful way to show how the many volunteers DO gain from their offering of service.
I love the way you told of Sunday school through the eyes of your MC. Great writing!
What a creative perspective. Nicely done.
This was a very assuring piece. I loved it's flow. Good writing!