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Micro Story Entry: Disney Whirl
“Thanks Dr. Whirl--I got hurt real bad.”
“Whar?”
“Ona ride--an’ it stingz real bad.”
“Dat knee, Earl? Here?”
“NO, no… Dis knee, Whirl!”
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a story for a Mini-Challenge, posted here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=272373
"Write a complete story (good title, strong beginning, conflict and a satisfactory ending) in 25 words or less. Yes, you read right… 25 words or less. We’ll call it a Micro-Story."
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--bro. tim pickl
Friday March 14, 2008 A.D.
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OH, my goodness, this is laugh out loud funny! I just got back from Disney World, and not only did I hurt my knees, also found muscles in my legs I didn't know I had. What a "whirl"wind! ;)
Thanks for the laugh.
Joanne Sher 
21 Mar 2008
hehe By the way, your story (along with your other micro-story "precious moment) was chosen as a "jewel" for this week. Check out the cheering section at the faithwriters' boards to see the list.
Hee hee. Very clever! :)
LOL still shakin' my head. Funny, very funny.
This one is tooo funny! How'd you write that anyway?!?
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