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I Was the One

by Julia May
11/09/06
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I Was the One

I was the harlot who should’ve been stoned
I was the tax collector my family disowned
I was the Levite who passed by the other side
With no help for my neighbor, did I provide.

I was the woman with the issue of blood
The one at the well whose life was just...mud
I was the leper who was shunned and abused
He made me whole and not once accused.

I was the blind man, He gave to me: sight
I was the Pharisee, always thought I was right
I was the disciple who denied Him thrice
The one also who sold Him for a lowly price.

I was there in the mob who called out to….crucify!
Just give me Barrabas! was my angry cry
I was Pilate, who washed my hands of the blame
The fault is not mine! I tried to proclaim.

I was the soldier who spat upon His face
I mocked and laughed at His humble disgrace
Then I nailed His hands to that Roman tree
Not once considering He was doing this….for me.

I was the one…..responsible for His death
The depravity of my sin….takes away my breath
He didn’t condemn me, but quietly took my place
Then all of my transgressions He began to erase.

I am the one for whom He offered Himself up
He drank my sins; and more, from the bitter cup
Won victory o’re my grave, defeated my death
The wonder of it all…...still....takes away my breath.












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Bessie Flint
14 Dec 2006
Julia, I don't know how I could have ever missed this one! It is absolutely beautiful.
Just beautiful!!

Bessie
Helen Dowd
12 Nov 2006
Julia, you have put into words, the whole history of mankind. You have put yourself (and the reader) into the shoes of all those whom you mentioned. We ARE guilty of all the sins mentioned. I like your conclusion, as you sum up the sins and lay them on the cross with Jesus. We are guilty, but we are forgiven!
Jamie glaser
11 Nov 2006
this takes away my breath! Wow, He is impressive in that He took upon so much just for us, and we were the reason He took upon the pain and burden, wow.
Thomas Kittrell
09 Nov 2006
Oh, Julia, this makes me want to cry. And to think, Jesus still loved us enough to die for us, taking our sins upon Himself. The cup was surely bitter which He drank from, for it had all our sins in it. Thanks so much for sharing this.
Thomas
Linda Wright
09 Nov 2006
Amen Julia. This is beauty, humility, honesty, insight. This is salvation. This is you at your very best. As you told me once... I wish I had written this one. Linda

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