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The Winding Road

by (Treava) Joyce Pool
05/30/06
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The Winding Road

When I looked into your eyes,
let me tell you what I found --
You didn’t know the road you’re on
would turn, then come unwound.

It led you through a valley.
Some call that valley “Despair.”
But you learned to hope in your God
while you were walking there.

Then, it sat you on a hill
and there, you could see the way.
There, you found a vision of truth
and learned how you should pray.

Oh, but slipping and sliding,
you were surely led back down
to teach you that you can’t depend
on high, mountainous ground.

The wilderness is shady
and it’s so easy to find.
It snickers "Life is cruel.
It's lonely and unkind."

But you weren’t left alone there.
God led you through to the end.
It is there you discovered Jesus
to be your Faithful Friend.

Now, He leads you to waters,
so still and peaceful and clear.
You hear Him whispering to you,
“Come, Beloved. Draw near.”

Ask me how I know these things.
I’m no mystic; that is true.
But this, my friend, is what I see
there, deep inside of you.

If the eyes are the mirrors
to the soul, then look at me.
I’ve walked a winding road as well.
I see just what I see.
© Joyce Pool
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Linda Wright
26 Sep 2006
Gorgeous writing! So insightful, so perceptive. This is my testimony as well as all the others who were blessed to read and comment on your poem. Your writing never fails to bring an Amen to my soul. Thanks for sharing with others. Linda
06 Jun 2006
Just Beautiful ...from beginning to end. God bless you dear sister.
Sharon McClean
02 Jun 2006
Another beautiful insightful article Joyce. Thank you so much for sharing this which so many of us can relate to. Love you, Sharon
William Mae
01 Jun 2006
This is so, so good Joyce. I guess it could apply to almost everyone who has lived life and found God. You’re poetry is always inspirational and always beautiful to read. Very well written.
Sherril Wendling
30 May 2006
Joyce, maybe you've never looked in my eyes, but you just told my story! And we can tell others, as Job did,
"I'd heard all about You, but now I can SEE You!"

Beautiful piece--this is why I track your submissions!Thank you!
Sherry Hoffcastel 
30 May 2006
Who told you that you could write my story? :D
Awesome job, by the way, sister. Its always comforting to know someone has walked the same path. Growing stronger every day...
Jounda LaMance
30 May 2006
Very well written sister! I do believe you have written my story! God Bless Jounda

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