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by Lauren Alan
12/30/25
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When everyone had gotten their meals, Judith looked at her watch. "Wow, it's late. I have to run. I have to finish my homework. By the way, Paul, thank you for helping me with physics. I'm understanding it a lot better."

"Good."

"Also, I just wanted to say that I'm glad to see you smiling again. You have a very handsome smile. I also love your thick, dark, curly hair." Judith playfully ran her fingers through Paul's short, soft hair. She giggled flirtatiously and left the restaurant.

Mr. Wong had seen the whole thing. "She's a nice girl, Paul," he said. "You should go for it."

Paul grinned. "That's exactly what I'm thinking," he said.

Mr. Wong smiled. Turning to Dina, he said, "You're quite the matchmaker for your big brother, aren't you?"

"This was my first time doing any matchmaking for him. I sure didn't pick out Bridget, the last girl he was with," Dina replied. "This one, Judith, is really sweet."

"She sure is. I didn't like Bridget, either. You did a good job, Dina," Mr. Wong commented.

"Thank you, Mr. Wong," Dina replied.

Paul and Dina said goodnight to Mr. Wong and left the restaurant. "Ooh, you got yourself a new girlfriend!" Dina cried excitedly as she and Paul walked to Paul's car. She jumped onto her brother's back and hugged him around the neck.

Paul chuckled a little. "Well, she's not quite my girlfriend yet. I need to start improving my grades before I can even think about dating."

"Paul, you're the smartest guy I know," Dina insisted. "You'll boost your grades back up in a week!"

Paul loved that his sister was so confident, but he wasn't sure he could get his grades back up that quickly. "Well, one thing's for certain, little sister. After I get my grades up, the first thing I'm going to do is ask Judith Spencer out!"

"All right!" Dina hugged Paul even more tightly around his neck.

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