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by Teresa Trotter

09/26/16
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The music has stopped playing...
The foot has stopped tapping...
The body has stopped twirling...
Shall I dance again...

The lyrics are all muffled...
The movements are all jumbled...
The corpses are all stiff...
Shall I dance again...

The tone can no longer be heard...
The choreography can no longer create...
The voices can no longer sing...
Shall I dance again...

Silence...
Silence...
Fills the room...

No melody...
No shuffle...
No band in bloom...

Shall I dance again...

Written By: Teresa Trotter

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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom

27 Sep 2016

Wow this is powerful. You evoked so many emotions from me in such few Words. A tiny bit of red ink: your nouns need to match your verbs. You have feet has and it should be feet have or foot has. The rest is quite lovely. I could see it in a song or even on a greeting card. I just know more people need to read it.

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