The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/17
Very descriptive imagery, with my only red ink alluding to how you link storms with gentleness. Otherwise, terrific.
10/13/17
I like the dichotomy of the poem.
10/13/17
I enjoyed the imagery and comparisons of physical storms and words.
Contrast easily seen what our words can do.

Can we ever tame our tongue?

Deliberate writing produces an understandable message.
I love the progression of the word storms. Thus is quite brilliant. Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!