The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the tongue-in-cheek humor in your entry, and I'm with you on the bugs.The spiritual application you made fitted the piece very well.
07/30/09
Awesome. Love this:) Excellent. I'm itching right now, by the way, just from reading your entry. Excellent, did I say that?
07/30/09
Let's just face it...whose husband gives foot massages? I know mine would offer that same look. Rich story.
Mona
07/30/09
Your humor had me smiling all the way through. Something I needed very much today. Thanks.
08/04/09
I want to be you when I grow up. I can't write humor like this if the life of every single person I loved (and my dog) were depending on it. The only thing I tripped on was this phrase "you can bet your bippy." Thinking maybe that's just a regional saying I haven't heard before? Great job!! Deserves a win.
08/07/09
Great monologue. You have the bestest sense of humor and minister the best points without beating me over the head with it. Great. God bless.