The Official Writing Challenge
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Good rhythm throughout this, and I like the title.
I especially liked the opener: Choosing people who fit my mold. A convicting statement right from the get-go!
At first you see a smug character, someone you are not sure you like. Then you feel the voice going softer, humility creeping in and ending with a voice that says I've seen the light!
Loved how the heart was cold in the beginning and then the "warmth" of repentance always brings a great conclusion. Job well done!