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07/23/11
Cute story. It's fun to think about Heaven. I'm sure it's better than our imaginations can even imaginate:) Much much more! Fun story...
07/24/11
This entry made me think.
"I've almost come to enjoy worrying." That's quite an honest insight, Addi! Thank you.

07/25/11
Love the sense of innocence and imagination throughout. A good fun read. Just waiting for all the things I like to be good for me...
07/25/11
Your characters' thoughts remind me how "human" we all are! Instead of seeing the blessings all around us, we focus on the mosquitoes! the fly in the ointment! As if to say, "If I (big I) were God...." God has His reasons for making us wait for that perfect place. I guess we could call it anticipation! Could it be so that we will actually appreciate it?