The Official Writing Challenge
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That was…riveting! Had the hair on the back of my neck standing up.
02/26/11
Awesome writing! I kind of wished the story could continue ... wanted to find out more about what happens. Thank you!
02/28/11
This piece has both intensity and passion. I really the like the title and how the story unfolds.
03/02/11
Ah. Nice suspense and mystery in here. I kinda figured it out as I got to the end, but I wished there were a few more details in between. The snippet with the cat was interesting, but the short sentences about it threw me off a bit. LOL. That's probably because I love cats so much. It was a fun detail in this piece.

Eerie ending--nicely done!