The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/11
Misleading title, as you fully engaged my senses as you have profiled your own so well. Thank you for such an absorbing geographical and inner journey.
This is a touching story, I like the MC, have felt lost lost and lonely lately. The story reminds to get on my knees too.
02/20/11
While I confess I was hoping for a talking bench, I thought your tale was well-told & I appreciated the bits of history you included, of which I was unaware. :) A spelling correction: "alter" should be "altar."
02/22/11
This was intense. Strong voice for your mc, even though she didn't feel strong. Great job weaving the chills and thrills in this story. And you're right...on my knees...is where I ought to be. Well done.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 3 and 27th overall!