The Official Writing Challenge
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Misleading title, as you fully engaged my senses as you have profiled your own so well. Thank you for such an absorbing geographical and inner journey.
This is a touching story, I like the MC, have felt lost lost and lonely lately. The story reminds to get on my knees too.
While I confess I was hoping for a talking bench, I thought your tale was well-told & I appreciated the bits of history you included, of which I was unaware. :) A spelling correction: "alter" should be "altar."
This was intense. Strong voice for your mc, even though she didn't feel strong. Great job weaving the chills and thrills in this story. And you're right...on my where I ought to be. Well done.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 3 and 27th overall!