The Official Writing Challenge
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I was enthralled by the atmosphere of your story. I don't whether this is even an issue, but I couldn't work out the gender of your main character.
A very interesting and thought provoking piece. I have never been in another culture and had never considered the issues you bring up in your story. Thanks for sharing this!
Interesting take on the topic. I enjoyed reading your descriptions. Good message as well.
Bless your MC for following his/her conscience.It read like a personal experience, so if it's you, God bless you! This was a very well told story.
I really loved the atmosphere in this story. I felt as if I experienced the conflict as a secondary element, which was a little disappointing because it promised to be just as engrossing as the atmosphere.

I'd love to read a longer version of this. Your last sentence was gold.
Am glad the MC held onto his faith in the midst of living in paradise.