The Official Writing Challenge
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If we all would learn the lesson of taking deep breathes before anger and frustration gets its hold on us, the world would be a much more pleasant place, then we all could pray together. I even found myself relaxing as I read, good job.
This is good and conveys the importance of taking a breath (or ten!) before we get all upset and even lash out at others. Good writing!
Very nicely done. I could feel the tension, and then the release.

If only we could always remember to take our frustrations to our Heavenly Father.
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