The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a great job with the characters. I felt a sense of impending doom, I thought they would get lost and the bright orange shirt was so she could be found. Then near the end I wondered if the MC was going to push her off the edge because she was in love with her fiancée. You did a great job of creating suspense, and I was floored by the butterflies.