The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/10
This is a very intense and fascinating story. I was drawn right into the nursery.

I'm not sure if it is because I'm so tired, but I found it hard to see the topic here.

However to me, that matters not, as I was enthralled with your story. I'm anxious to read more about the next 17 years of her life.