The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/10
I like the background info leading up to the actual event. You use some great alliteration. And I love how you knit the story together when you ask yourself, "Where was Steve McQueen when I needed him?" Funny.
02/06/10
Very good, only you're definitely giving away your age with the "Blob and Godzilla", (oops I am too because I remember them!):)
02/07/10
Well told, the woods are just too scary by night!
Most EXCELLENT....I was lol the entire way! This may be my favorite article yet!!
Very fun take on Grrr! I could feel the main character's paniced emotions when she heard that "bear" outside the tent. Well done!
02/12/10
Superb writing! Loved this well written story. Can you tell? Congratulations on placing in your level. Have you checked out the Challenge Forums?
02/15/10
Grrreat "grrr" entry...I, too, remember all of the movies you referred too. And , yes, "Grizzly" scared the dickens out of me , too!
This is so much fun, Brenda--from the title on! My kids might need therapy, too.