The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
Beautiful! Probably not popular, but beautiful. Lessons in discipline don't get people excited, but Oh, how important they are in structuring a young life.
Great analogy.
06/05/09
This was a trip back in time to my own childhood, tugging at my mother's leg begging for a taste of that chocolate and being 'bitterly disappointed' with the taste!
Great analogy. Great discriptions... puppy dog brown eyes, insipid smirking... good job!