The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/08
Great description of uncle Orie clambering up the tree. I could imagine the wind howling through the branches.
I would have been inclined to make more of the symbolism of the cross and the pastor's visit so as to give your story a stronger sense of contrast. But otherwise well done.
10/20/08
What a delightful character you hve created here, along with a great ending. Well done.
10/21/08
A great reminder of the true meaning of Christmas. Well done!