The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
Graphic, compelling and heartbreaking. Great story-telling.
09/18/08
Very nicely told story. Sad. Good descriptions.
09/18/08
This is such a sad story. You made it very real. Good work!
Mean old landlord! I liked the simple authentic style this author used. Simple yet packs a punch.
09/19/08
Well done and unfortunately, too true.
09/20/08
Well done, could just jar some from complacency with a good reality check.