The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
A very sad story that I hope is fictional - as it doesn't sound logical that a lifelong pet, especially one that had been so loyal, would be so easily forgotten after coming up missing.

Aside from the sadness of the story, it could use a little editing to make it a smooth and easy read without the clutter of unnecessary words. But practice makes perfect and it's a lovely story of a wonderful, faithful, and loyal dog, pal and companion. Good job.
05/24/08
Very sad, but your last line did give me pause to think.