The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
Flawlessly written and engaging from beginning to end. Bravo.
04/12/08
A lovely, engaging story from a grandmother's past. For a moment there I thought that he would get married overseas and not come back. Couple of things - the MC appears to be called Sally in one spot, and, is not 21 minus 15 six years?
04/15/08
Sweet story.

I did see the MC referred to as Sally, but other than that it was a pleasure to read!