The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/05
The ending is a bit too "neat," I think. Also, it's difficult to follow when you change points of view this often...I would suggest picking either Kari or her mother and telling the whole thing from that point of view.
01/28/05


I love the way the story was told. As a family they were able to get the truth to their teenage daughter without fighting and in the true spirit of God.

Kathy
Good job on what really does go on within families behind closed doors. God bless you.