The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/08
Great scenario for the topic here. I love the way you tied the beginning and the ending together, and the surprise of who sent the flowers. I would have liked to hear more in the beginning of the story about the mean secretary, but in a way that would have made it more predictable. You got the point across without it. Well done. :)
Great example. Good ending.