The Official Writing Challenge
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Much to ponder here - you portrayed the thinking of some VERY well. I enjoyed this read.
The "fortress mentality" is death to the church. Excellent reminder of an important truth.
I loved the Nancy's silent shout of her opinion of her husband's stand. Great, well-written reminder that WE are commanded to do the Great Commission.
I loved Nancy in this one. Great character and she delivered one of the best lines this week without saying a word. Great job. I also liked the commentary the title provided for the piece.
God bless!!!!!
Congrats, Edy, for writing one of my favorite stories of the week and creating the best unspoken line. Masterful. You should be proud. Praise the Lord. God bless.
I didn't see this entry earlier. I like the part near the middle where he says his mother always told them to "keep your skirts clean." It brought the image of a Pharisee to my mind immediately and tied in well with the part where he asks her if she thinks he's a Pharisee later. Always let me know when you do a challenge entry!!~I love to read your writings :):):)