The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this. It has a message that is very important for each of us. You brought it out well.
You really captured the sounds of the burial and the heart of the neighbor who cared enough to share the Lord. I especially loved the end of the first paragrapah about what door opened for her.
Made me wonder "What part do I play?" I felt for the old lady and her material, but not spiritaul wealth. Your writing was well done.