The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/07
I like this. It has a message that is very important for each of us. You brought it out well.
03/16/07
You really captured the sounds of the burial and the heart of the neighbor who cared enough to share the Lord. I especially loved the end of the first paragrapah about what door opened for her.
Made me wonder "What part do I play?" I felt for the old lady and her material, but not spiritaul wealth. Your writing was well done.