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TITLE: From the Heart of God | Previous Challenge Entry
By Linda Delgado
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I’ve now had a taste of life here on Earth.
While experiencing all the five senses,
teaching and preaching to all who would listen.
Showing compassion to all who receive Him,
some of them do and others will leave them.
The sick have been healed, the lame can now walk;
Even the blind, deaf and mute - can see, hear and talk!
All of creation is subject to His name,
for the devil, himself, is even put to shame!
Although, there is one, who will betray Him
he thinks that his own earnings can save him.
Jesus, will soon be used to redeem many;
His blood being shed from the cross named Calvary.
Many will think that His death will be finished at the Cross,
but when they die without believing Him, their souls will be lost.
Sadly, many people are still living sinful today,
because they don’t believe Jesus is the only Way!
I am still patiently waiting for you and many others,
so, you may know He is the One closer than a brother.
My Son, is patiently waiting for My command;
Will you be joining us, when We’re joined together at last?
John 3:16
"For God so loved the world, that He gave
His only begotten Son, that whoever believes
in Him should not perish but have everlasting
life."
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There were a few misplaced commas that were distracting (after "Jesus" in one stanza, and "My Son" in another.) These should have commas only if addressing Jesus, not when He is the subject of the sentence.
Like someone else said, it was hard to recognize that this was meant as a diary entry of God, and therefore the relevance to the topic was not immediately obvious.