The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/06
Oh WOW! This is SO well written - you do an excellent job of showing us every detail. Knowing this is based on a true story makes it even more poignant. You have definitely moved me!
08/07/06
HELLO? Where is everybody? 27 people have read this skillfully-written story and only one has commented on it? What is going on here? This was AWESOME! I hope you're including this in a larger story you're working on...(hint, hint!)
08/09/06
Great story - told in a way that reminded me how thankful I am for people who are called to go out as missionaries. I noticed He thought should be... he thought I think...small h. I think you are very talented and brought your story to life!