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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Enter (02/27/06)
Enter, enter where? Are we entering into someone’s house entering into the kingdom entering through a doorway into the outdoors? If we enter are we able to exit. If we exit are we able to enter once again. I imagine that entering into the kingdom would be the greatest of them all. Na, enter in to the holy of holies would be divinely best! Is it cliché to enter in through the outdoors, oh wait that was a Zeppelin song. Enter in to the tranquility of the Lord. Into His majestic peace; the only peace that surpasses all understanding and gives more than any other thing can offer. What it would be like to be there once again entering into Him where he calls me friend.
Enter, one of the most profound words you will ever hear. Synonymous is piercing. Hebrew’s says God’s word pierces the soul dividing bone and marrow. This is quite a way to enter.
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Edy T Johnson
03/13/06
"Enter, one of the most profound words you will ever hear." Could be a good topic, but I'm still wondering (So?) what you wanted us to take away from this paragraph. Your list of questions needs development. A reader wants writing that informs, moves, touchs, inspires, entertains, or otherwise gets his attention. Sorry to say, this doesn't do it, for me. Suggestion: read some of the other entries in various categories (sermonettes, poems, stories) to see how others approach the topic! I'm sure you can do better :)
Phyllis Inniss 
03/13/06
I have to agree with the last reviewer. You have more questions than answers. We need to know exactly what your message is.