The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the poetic word usage and expression in this piece. I wanted to quote a couple of examples, but the more I read, the more wonderful examples I found. Please put this in your portfolio and submit it for a Christian publication. You may need to tighten a few places here and there. The more I read, the more I was drawn into this beautiful and poignant piece. Good job!
02/23/05
Great teaching! The analogy of the gold worked really well. The issue of balance is so important, but not always easily mastered. Great writing!
I was expecting something different from the title! So I was suprised in a good way, to see the different small stories here woven together for one great thought. enjoyed
This is a lesson we all have to learn. And I certainly learned my share. If young people would take charge of their own finances early in life(that is, if we parents forced them to) Then a big part of it would be easier.Greatttt story and lesson!