The Official Writing Challenge
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Good flow and great story.
10/26/05
What a charismatic man! Sounds like someone we'd all benefit from knowing-at least when it came to buying good food! What a wonderful story:)
10/27/05
Interesting and an enjoyable read, although some lose ends seemed to fray, I had to go back and re-read to time some things together. Thanks for posting.
Oh, I really like this one! Love that last line...perfect ending.