The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for your poetry. Taking a different view only comes after we turn from this world towards Jesus.
I am in awe of the skill it takes to write poetry like this. You have captured it so well.
Oh, this is good! I like how the story unfolds in this poem, moving the person from his comfort zone in a not so comfortable area but the Lord wants him to trust in HIM, as he paved the way. I liked your little morsels of humor scattered in this piece.
"...First you must eat all he sets down before you
Be it pancake or noodles or fish
Or locust or camel a wild beast, even two
Donít hesitate and do not grumble
I am commanding you to try every dish." Boy do we grumble sometimes don't we? Wink. Your story poem is one many of us can relate to.:)
06/15/11
Totally enjoyed it, especially the end. Well done. Cheers
06/15/11
Amen! Great look from Peter's point of view.
06/15/11
What a fun take on this story. Great work!
06/15/11
An excellent piece! I enjoyed this poem from Peter's POV with our Lord speaking to him. I especially like the account of the vision and the message of the needed change in outlook. You have brought to life the events through your words.