The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/05
Interesting that a thorn could be a flower. Paul knew all too well how a thorn could be a catalyst for growth. Very good!
What a lovely story. Brian's thorn was indeed a rose. I very much liked the thorn being the creation of a friendship between the two boys. I enjoyed this very much.
10/13/05
An interesting array of characters. I thought the line that began "As if he hadnít heard..." could have been better worded as Brian had heard them, he was on the verge of crying.