The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the story. I could just about feel the boys anxiety, because I've been there. Thanks for sharing and FYI put a space between paragraphs. Easier reading for the reader. Thanks and God bless.
01/15/11
Thanks for sharing your story. I'm so thankful he found his knife. I'm also very thankful for indoor rest rooms. I enjoyed reading this, and as someone has already said spacing between paragraphs makes it easier to read.