The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the story. I could just about feel the boys anxiety, because I've been there. Thanks for sharing and FYI put a space between paragraphs. Easier reading for the reader. Thanks and God bless.
Thanks for sharing your story. I'm so thankful he found his knife. I'm also very thankful for indoor rest rooms. I enjoyed reading this, and as someone has already said spacing between paragraphs makes it easier to read.