The Official Writing Challenge
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Hey - I remember the yellow capsules in the margarine and squeezing till it all turned yellow. I love your descriptions - almost felt like the memories were mine. Nicely done.
09/11/09
Vivid images that remind me of my great aunts' house in Mississippi. Thank you for the memories.
Oh I just loved this story. Kind of reminds me of those days of long ago.
09/15/09
Oh lovely! I put this one down as a winner! The child eyes viewed as an adult. The first line is great and sets the tone for the whole peice.Clever!
09/16/09
Oh, the memories. There's been half a dozen or so such houses in my life. One of them, where my future husband and I spent many hours in the front porch swing.
09/17/09
I remember tasting the drops of honey from the tips of the honeysuckle. This story reminded me of my Granny's house in a little town in Tennessee. Congratulations on being Highly Commended for your level.