The Official Writing Challenge
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So realistic in details and emotions. Great sequence with the "flight tech". How wonderful your MC was given that 2nd chance. :)
08/14/08
Amazing testimony to our truly loving Father in Heaven. Great feeling in this piece, and a great surprise at the end.
Marvelous story that reminds us how much God wants us to belong to Him.
08/18/08
Crisp writing that conveyed events and emotions, and left me cheering. Very well done.
The rapid switch between the first and second paragraph threw me for a moment, but I picked it back up and really enjoyed it. I always enjoy a good twist or two and you certainly entertained me while keeping a true teaching in focus.