The Official Writing Challenge
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Great Story. Rings True! Kept me reading till the end.
Loved this. Such a good relationship story. A neat way of including God into each life.
I would check one thing though. You might want to reword your third paragraph. At first reading, I thought the birds had picked up the brochures. Might want to clarify that.
A sweet story. Opposites can attract and without the Lord their differences may tear them a part. Nice story. I liked your descriptive words and the dialogue with the elderly couple.
02/20/07
Awww! This is sweet.