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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: WILD (11/16/17)
We are all living in sin. Whenever I work with those who don't believe in God, I fee like I am lost in the woods sometimes, and then I get a little depressed. My eyes tend to fill with tears, and I try not to show it.



As a teenager, I loved getting together with my youth group, and going on weekend retreats at a camp. This particular place that I went to about six times, is often used as a summer camp for children and staff. It is also used for other church meetings as well.

After I left the place with my youth group, I knew that I was heading back to school with a bunch of non-believers. I felt depressed in school as well especially when I was bullied. I felt that the students I attended classes with were not interested in education as much as fooling around, and telling jokes. I focused on reading, art, and typing. I also excelled myself in those areas in college as well.



Sometimes I felt out of place in the fellowship where I attend church because some people gossips about others whom they work with or go to school with. A few times I was able to have conversation with a friend.



It does not matter where we are or what we do, a lot of us are walking in the wilderness of sin, but ever I think of Jesus who walked in Jerusalem embracing little children, and healing the sick then it takes my mind off it.
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Larry Whittington
11/24/17
As I read a sentence or two I had to rearrange a modifier or two for me to get the full intention of your sentences. One word was spelled correctly but was not the word you had intended it to be. You may have left out one word in a sentence towards the end of you article. I just added a word to complete the sentence. Sometimes you can catch these by reading your piece one word at a time pointing to each word you say.

I think when you feel uncomfortable in a crowd that is acting or talking in a certain way, it is God's Holy Spirit letting you know that's not the way you should act or talk.

You have good thoughts so keep writing.