The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice commentary!
02/26/17
This feels very natural and your writing style authentic. It's like I'm actually a Facebook friend sharing in your life struggles. The first paragraph, for me, was a little confusing. I didn't quite understand how it fit with the shout out to your cousins, friends, family, etc. I did feel your emotion as you reached out to each group though -which is not always easy to accomplish- over all I think well done.
02/28/17
I want to get to know you. Such a rich life.Yes,with heartaches, but with lots of love. Thanks for sharing. There was so much for me to digest. I want to read more detailed accounts. You have so much to share with others. You hit the topic in my view. Now be creative and expand on all of those life experiences. I bet you could make me cry. God bless.
03/02/17
Beautiful article, and very much on topic. Well done.