The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/08
Very good entry. You have a great description of this most "unconventional doctor." I was wondering, though, was he a Christian? If not, it's very sad that he died just a good man. This is a nice piece.
Laury
Your description of Dr Keltch - from his ponytail to his paunch resting on the Harley belt buckle is excellent. I particularly liked "He sported a graying Sam Elliott mustache that made his mouth almost invisible until he smiled."

His death made me go "Ohhh, that's so sad".

What a great ending that a memorial fund was set up showing his generosity has rubbed off on others.



02/11/08
A spelling error or two, but other than that an excellent piece! Great job describing your MC. Very nicely done.
I loved this article! The wording is very descriptive, it fits the topic perfectly, and it is very emotional.

I was sad to hear about the doctor dying, and yet it is great that a fund was setup in his honor. Awesome job!
02/14/08
You really know how to make a character come alive! Great writing!