The Official Writing Challenge
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11/18/07
This is what being part of the Body of Christ is all about. We are one body joined together by His Spirit. We need each other. Just as the hand cannot do it's job without the help of the rest of the body, so we need each other. We all have times when we need the help of other believers and we are to be there for those who are weak. Great story and well written.
You have a nice conversational style in your writing that's makes your piece easy to read. The personal example you bring in with your friend helps the reader to relate - good work!!
11/19/07
You made some very good and practical observations in this entry. I like the example you used of your friend's struggle to trust God during her difficult health problem. You made the situation very real.