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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Walk (07/20/06)

TITLE: Now, Come and Let Us Go
By Darlene Casino
07/25/06


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I walked around a pond,
Thatís not too far home.
A calm, peaceful setting
So there, my thoughts could roam.
I listened to the birds,
Singing their happy song,
Sensing Godís own Presence
Known to Him, I belong.

I strolled along a brook,
That rushed to join the sea.
I saw a mother duck,
With babies at her knee.
A bench was by the walk,
Giving a momentís rest.
So, quietly I sat
Knowing I was blessed.

I strolled along a path,
That ran beside the sea.
I watched the many boats
And people passing me.
We shared a nod, a smile,
On a warm summer morn.
I sensed His awesome peace,
On His shoulderís I am borne.

And then He said to me,
ďCome walk with me my child,
In the garden of your heart,
For Iím of temper mild.
I want to show you much,
Of what you need to know.
Come walk with Me awhile,
Now, come and let us go.Ē


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Joanne Sher 07/30/06
This poem radiates peace - so lovely! I really enjoyed this!
Ann FitzHenry07/31/06
Very nice poem. I really enjoyed your rhyming scheme. Beautiful images throughout.