The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/06
Cute.
05/26/06
Even though I am not a poetry person, I really enjoyed this - particularly the donkey stanza.
This poem appeals to me, with some nice turns of a phrase (I liked the 'giggling grasses' and the 'riding in on a donkey's submission!') It's almost childlike in its keen simplicity. I think this would be especially effective in a children's or young teen magazine. Nice work!

You choose your words so well. This is the best poetry I've read so far. It flowed so smoothly and the descripive language captured me.